Saturday, April 6, 2013

NO COME BACK,FAREWELL MY ONLY DREAM-GIRL>


Never settle for being someone's OTHER when you know you have the potential to be someone's ONLY.Never play with the feelings of others because you may win the game but you will surely loose the person for a lifetime.If you cheat on someone who is willing to do anything for you. You actually cheated yourself out of true loyalty.Most people cheat because they are paying more attention to what they are missing rather than what they have.



You butchered my beautiful life
You burnt my tender heart
You buried my lonesome soul

You buried my lonesome soul
That was your own twin flame
Waiting for you in every life to unite

Waiting for you in every life to unite
You stamped my million rainbow reveries
Why did you lie to me for loving deeply?

Why did you lie to me for loving deeply?
Today you made me cry by cheating
Tomorrow you will cry by cheating

Tomorrow you will cry by cheating
One day my soul-mate you will sense our souls are twined
Till then no come back,Farewell my only Dream-girl

Till then no come back,Farewell my only Dream-girl
As a lonely broken spirit I will move on wiping sore tears
 Concealing your sly breathe in me smiling serving many 
 


When Kristen cheated Robert, he felt devastated  as he trusted her alot out of deep love. He did forgive her for he still loves her but he has not recovered fully..Emotions are same everywhere so NEVER EVER CHEAT the one who trusts you.Cheating on someone is deeper than people think,it destroys their outlook on love,their relationships & peace within themselves.Many say they never get jealous when they see their ex with someone else because their parents always taught them to give their used toys to the less fortunate, yes I might also say the same but my heart will not allow to part with my special favourite Toy that was with me for a long long time not just to play with but REALLY to love who has made me to become REAL..
GOD SEES THE TRUTH BUT WAITS 

This poem is in the cascade form where the last line of the first stanza is used as the first line of second Stanza,the last line of the second stanza as the first line of the third stanza,last line of the third stanza as the first line of the fourth stanza & so on...


26 comments:

  1. Some strong words there ... good work with the poem !!!

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  2. Nice job as usual! I enjoy your posts.

    Have a beautiful day!

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    1. beautiful thanks to a beautiful teacher.GOD<3U

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  3. infidelity is easy... doesn't require much efforts
    may that's why it is much common these days

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    1. i agree with u.infidelity has broken many good relations playing with many hearts& that's why heart attack & divorce is on increase shattering many lives.Jyoti i liked ur comment.GOD<3U

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  4. thats emotional
    thats touching
    thats painful
    thats poetic
    and thats something that happens all over...

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    1. smiles:)deeps u point out things so well..poetry is indeed a spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings..GOD<3U

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  5. The fool is the one who cheats, not the one who got cheated. It is best to move on from the cheater, forgive but learn. There can be brighter days!

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    1. jennifer so true.. Thanks alot.GOD<3U

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  6. you have to wonder what they think they will be getting other than a temporary relief, knowing they can not truly have the other life...and in turn wreck the life they do have...the feelings come through strong in this...the betrayal is hard....

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    1. some persons choose the biggest fool so that they can fool them for a lifetime after cheating the best ones, here lust overpowers love to fail at last where happiness is short lived.God shows the truth & cheaters r not spared.Sincere thanks for ur thoughtful comments .GOD<3U

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  7. Great thoughts. I've heard Kristen's been after Robert, and he's the one saying, "Get lost."

    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

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    1. Aloha Much thanks to a gifted Writer&Mom.its easy to say get lost but hard to forget a person whose loving u for a long time turns to be a cheater& her family accepts u as their own dearest one.in a big dilemma.Smiles:)GOD<3U

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  8. The cheaters are the ones who loose. Every time.

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    1. i wonder how a person can luv one to cheat when seeing a new one runs behind &the process continues is it true luv?how can such a person b trusted who acts love to wreck many to get wrecked.Jaybird bunch of thanks.GOD<3U

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  9. Great thought...In the end it is the cheater who is cheated and lose something very valuable...Beautiful and touching poem...

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    1. my heartfelt thanks to a great hindi writer Kailash sharmaji.GOD<3U

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  10. Lovely blog! And yes, God does see all. To answer your question on my blog, Koicto is a fictional character, but the places in the book are all real. The Fremont Indians had no formal written language. We don't even know what they called themselves. I created Nahchee from the Ute word "Noochee".

    Have a wonderful day!

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  11. Bunch of beautiful thanks to a wonderful popular writer..i'm pleased& happy to see u here with the information about ur novel Koicto clearing some of my doubts..i really enjoyed..hope to hear from u more.Amy smiles:)God<3u

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  12. very touching ... know what? it's actually the cheater who got cheated of all good things in life ... she's the one who needs pity.

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  13. bunch of thanks for reading & commenting..what u said is the fact.God<3u

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  14. Wish if only people would really realize how painful it is to be cheated, to have your heart slayed by that one person on whom you've put your entire faith... Great work, tremendously moving. :)

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    1. Samar thanks for ur depth of reading & I'm following u.As i have got a masters in Eng.lit,happy to know u have done PENGS & is an Eng.lit.Student.GOD<3U

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